In this persuasive essay, Kimberly tries to persuade Mr. Courtney that she needs chocolate, and that he should buy her a bar. Is she asking for too much? What should he do? Tell him in the comments!
Dear Mr.Courtney,
I heard you’ve been buying Lots, and LOTS of chocolate bars that are crunchy, creamy, and perfect! .You’re probably thinking “ why should I give this chocolate bar to Kimberly?” But, that’s why I’m writing this letter to you, the reasons why you should get me that chocolate bar.
Improving Grades.
I know what you’re thinking Mr.Courtney, Kimberly can’t be that smart to get some Fs, Cs, and Ds to some As and Bs but i did!. I also have been trying to improve my grades in all my classes. I’ve been turning in my work neatly and ready to go. I am listening to the teacher and taking notes to learn more. I am trying to get my work done at home, For example my AR points. I may have a few points but I have been working it up and working harder. I also have been thinking about staying after school to get my work done and not fall behind.
Working On My Sassiness.
Mr. Courtney you don’t want me to fail class do you? If you don’t then please get me that chocolate bar. I am going to give you reasons why you should. I have been working on my sassiness. For starters I have been respectful to teachers and my friends. For example, I haven’t disrupted class when teachers are giving lectures.Secondly,I don’t bully ANYBODY, maybe I sometimes play around but I don’t go to extremes.
Being Helpful.
I have been being helpful by helping other people clean up. And also helping my friends with homework or we sometimes help each other. I always do my task for example, by doing my chores or finishing other homework. I also finish the task my teachers tell me to do. So PLEASE give me that chocolate bar.
In Conclusion
In conclusion you should give me that king sized chocolate bar because I have given you many reasons why I should.I have also shown I am a respectful student and care so hope you pick me!